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Chapter 3 - The Room with the Crooked Comet

Nora learned about the video from a stranger in the hospital corridor. She had walked slowly toward the neonatal unit with a nurse when a woman holding flowers looked up from her phone and said, “Aren't you the girl with the awful dad?”

Nora stopped. “I'm the woman who just gave birth.”

The stranger went scarlet and put the phone away. The nurse asked whether Nora wanted to continue or return to her room. Nora kept walking. Elsie was waiting for her, and Victor had taken enough of that day already.

Cal told her about Wren's messages after Nora finished her visit with the baby. He didn't pretend he'd been protecting her by keeping them secret.

“I thought you deserved some sleep,” he said. “I should've asked when you woke up.”

“Show me.”

The uploaded clip began with Nora backing away from the study, shouting, “That isn't yours.” It cut to Cal striking Victor. Wren had omitted the hair pulling, the raised fist, the water breaking, and the emergency call. Nora watched it without speaking. The comment section was a mess of speculation and cruelty. People who had never met her were debating whether a pregnant woman could be trusted with a house.

“I'm not reading that,” she said, returning the phone. “Save it. Don't argue with them.”

“Wren wants me to meet her alone.”

“And you won't.”

“I figured you'd say that.”

“Because if she has a recording, we can have her send it somewhere that preserves the original. I'm not sending you into a parking lot to play detective.”

Nora called the officer whose card she'd kept beneath her water cup. She reported the public video and Wren's offer. The officer explained how Wren could contact investigators directly. Nora passed the information to Cal and asked him to text Wren a single response: SEND THE ORIGINAL THROUGH THE INVESTIGATOR. NO PRIVATE MEETING.

Then she asked for the hospital's patient advocate. The unknown woman in the corridor had been startled, not malicious, but Nora wanted the staff to understand how exposure could follow a patient into a place where she was supposed to recover. The advocate arranged a reminder about her privacy instructions and a quieter route to visit Elsie. Nora thanked her. She had worked as a glass restoration artist for ten years; she'd learned that asking for what a job required wasn't the same as apologizing for needing it.

By afternoon she was tired enough to shake. She missed Aaron so sharply that reaching for her phone felt like pressing a bruise. She opened their last conversation. Seventeen days before he died, he'd sent a photograph of the nursery ceiling, blue paint on his nose and a crooked gold comet above an empty crib.

DON'T LAUGH, he'd written. I MEASURED IT TWICE.

SHE'LL LOVE IT, Nora had replied.

His final message to her was from the morning of the crash: PICKING UP MILK. ALSO DON'T LET YOUR DAD IN THE STUDY. LONG STORY. TONIGHT.

She had answered with a question mark. Aaron never came home to explain.

Cal saw her expression. “What is it?”

“Something I kept telling myself I imagined.” She showed him the screen. “Why the study?”

Cal sat down. “Aaron called me that morning. Asked if I knew a place where he could copy plans without his name showing up in a client's email. I told him to use my printer.”

“Did he?”

“No. He said he'd tell me when he got there.”

“You didn't mention this at the funeral.”

“You were trying to stand through the service. I didn't think a printer was what you needed to hear.”

“You don't decide which pieces of my husband belong to me.”

Cal accepted that without arguing. “You're right.”

Nora stared at the photo. Aaron had made a living restoring old staircases and cabinets, repairing things people thought were past saving. During their marriage he had worked alongside Nora on glass panels and protected her mother's house with the same devoted stubbornness he gave to damaged wood. He did not usually hide appointments from her. She wondered what her father had said to make him start.

An attorney named Denise Alvarez visited that evening at Nora's request. Denise had represented Nora when June's estate transferred the property years earlier. She brought a copy of the recorded ownership document and spoke plainly: Nora was the sole current owner; Victor had no authority simply because he was her father; any claimed purchase agreement would need examination. Denise could help challenge a false representation, but she would not announce victory before seeing the documents Victor had been using.

“He says Aaron promised it to him,” Nora said.

“Then ask him to produce the promise. Don't sign anything to disprove a story he hasn't proved.”

“Can he keep me out while I'm in here?”

“He can't decide you surrendered your home by pushing you onto the porch. We'll coordinate safe access and address any unlawful exclusion. No one should send you back there alone.”

Nora's eyes filled at the word home. She had grown up in that kitchen watching June cut colored glass into flowers. The kitchen door still carried small pencil lines marking her height at every birthday. Victor had left them when she was thirteen, and her mother had spent the next twelve years making a life without waiting for his return. Aaron had built the blue nursery in the room where June used to store sheets of amber glass.

“I want the house,” Nora said. “Not because it's expensive. Because I know what every crooked thing in it means.”

Denise nodded. “Then the decisions about it begin with you.”

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After Denise left, Nora received a photograph from Wren's account. It showed Aaron's workbench in the study, stripped bare. The caption read: CLEARING SPACE FOR NEW BEGINNINGS.

On the wall behind the empty bench, someone had painted over the little pencil mark where Aaron had written the date their daughter was due.

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